Rae
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Post by Rae on Oct 31, 2014 5:02:17 GMT
I know I'm an adult but I need an adultier adult...yes that's a thing just go with it lol. I'm stuck on my novel and it's not even November 1. I suck lol. Okay these are my issues:
1. I need a name for the bad guys/demons/anti-angels/hell-if-I-know-what-they-really-are. They are the guys that try to get a Fragile's (a human that's suffered a tragedy and is on the verge of suicide, homicide or other self destructive behavior) soul either in life (making them kill or be destructive in other ways) or in death (pushing them to suicide). They can Whisper (exactly what it sounds like...you know that little voice you hear in your head. yep those are Whispers of the bad guys) to the Fragiles to convince them to do what they want them to do. Not sure what they look like yet. Some may be ugly, some may be beautiful.
2. I need a name for a thingamabob that gives the guardian angels their next assignments. I don't want it to be a tablet or anything electronic so I was thinking a special book or something but for now it's called thingamabob.
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Jules
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Post by Jules on Oct 31, 2014 7:52:06 GMT
Ooo I like the sound of this... when do we get to read??
The bad guys remind me of these dudes from one of my favourite Buffy episodes (not sure if you used to watch it..) called "Hush". The bad guys were called The Gentlemen I think, and they would steal a persons voice before cutting out their hearts. It was one of the BEST written episodes I've ever seen... and I've always like the title, could that work as a name?
The other thing your novel reminded me of was something out of Dragon Age.. have you played it before? There's this place that is sort of a dream type world called "The Fade" where your spirit is supposed to go when it leaves your body after death, or while you're dreaming, kinda like a subconscious world I guess. What about something like "Fade" for your whispering bad dudes? Or something similar, like the "Fray", because they prey on Fragiles...?
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Rae
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Post by Rae on Nov 2, 2014 14:18:32 GMT
Oh Jules you have given me many many ideas. Hopefully you'll get to read it soon...if I finish it.
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Post by Rae on May 4, 2015 18:41:16 GMT
Hmmm... this wasn't such a bad idea. I may just go back to tinkering with this...
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